On-theme and well-paced!

Very enjoyable  and interesting story about a grad student who has to question his supervisor's work.

 Liked the exchange of letters, which was a good use of ink's capabilities.

*Insert Tom Cruise joke here*

I really liked it! I got the best ending (I think) on my first full try, then irritated Dr. Laine as much as I could. 

Your story telling style is excellent, and the story you painted was awesome. 

This was honestly beautiful. Love how it's technically linear but still has effective choices. Great work!

Thank you so much for not being blinding white with black text.

Also, Yay Ubuntu Font! And the CSS color transition is really nice looking.

Also the story is amazing and I very much enjoyed this entry.