Hello. I've participated previosly at this ink jam (lot's of fun). 

I am game design student and I have an assignment in which I have to collect feedback on the project that I've made. I need to update the project based on the feedback that I'll receive. As this is an ink game, I am mainly looking for feedback on narrative design, but any type is very much welcomed!

As a refresher, my project is called "You Think You Can Escape Me?" and it's a short interactive story about odd-timed coincidences and romance.

Tagline: "You start your day in the worst possible way: suddenly remembering your ex ".

Link to the game: https://maria-hodor.itch.io/you-think-you-can-escape-me

Feel free to write the feedback here or to write to me directly (you can find my instagram or my email in my linktree).

Hope you have fun!!!