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Hello,

Thank you for the reply! 

I need it as soon as possible, or at least by the end of the week. 

Thanks in advance!

Thanks!

Hello. I've participated previosly at this ink jam (lot's of fun). 

I am game design student and I have an assignment in which I have to collect feedback on the project that I've made. I need to update the project based on the feedback that I'll receive. As this is an ink game, I am mainly looking for feedback on narrative design, but any type is very much welcomed!

As a refresher, my project is called "You Think You Can Escape Me?" and it's a short interactive story about odd-timed coincidences and romance.

Tagline: "You start your day in the worst possible way: suddenly remembering your ex ".

Link to the game: https://maria-hodor.itch.io/you-think-you-can-escape-me

Feel free to write the feedback here or to write to me directly (you can find my instagram or my email in my linktree).

Hope you have fun!!!

Ok, thank you for pointing that out. It is actually good insight. 

I will fix this at the next update. 

Hi, thank you for trying the game. I'm really glad you've enjoyed it! 

I am a little unsure what the warning should be about. 😳😳

  Could you please explain to me why you think it is necessary? Also thank you for the feedback.

Really captivating story! I only wish there was more that we could uncover when interviewing the monster.

The dystopic feel was really well captured. Made me depressed thinking about this possible future (10/10 game).

Wow, thanks for the comm!

You've really put into words what I was feeling when I was making the game!

Haha thanks!

Yeah, it works like a charm 😳

Thanks for pointing out the typos, I was in a bit of a hurry. But I'm working on an update (more illustrations and pathways hopefully) so I'll also get around to fix all the errors.

Thanks, I'll look into it

So fun and cute!

The art is so beautiful and the attention to details is out of this world ! Just WOW! ♥

Thank you ♥♥