Hmm, same here, game crashes after Wright makes his escape.

Also the sound effects don't stop after one starts, so there was that hypnosis beep the whole rest of the game.

I won't comment too much on the art given that it's stock assets. It definitely has that "it's quality enough but doesn't really fit" feel to it. The bedroom background has a mirror that, um, isn't. Look closely and you'll see that it's just see-through. I found that amusing.

The sound effect that plays when Wright manipulates people is painful and made me want to mute the game. I guess it's a placeholder but I would have preferred nothing at all.

I also got to what seemed like a half-implemented battle, and then the game errored out.

The beginnings of the plot sound interesting, but this game is clearly very far from being finished. Apart from the aforementioned issues, the dialogue has some typos and is clunky at times. The flow between scenes is better than some, but still not great.

Unfortunately it's hard to get a feel for this game in its current state. I don't think we even got to the point where we see Martha's powers in action.

It was all going well till the sounds just got stuck and then I battled a giant dookie and then game crashed. Did I win ? 

Some of the art was really nice here. Would be good to see this finished ! Good Luck!