Finally a game with a story included! The character is responsive and there isn't to much momentum. Would have been nice to have the checkpoints in the first version. I'd suggest giving the player a diagonal aim, the placement of some bats was making them hard to hit. Great game!

I really like the story you tell through the game. Even if you say you're not an artist, the art is very nice and consistent. I just had some difficulties with the platforms, some of them need to me rearrange in space so we can bump our head in the bottom of another platform. Maybe the enemies are a bit too agressive, like, when you enter in a room, it can be great to have a few time safe before they start to attack you (because here, it's like they start attacking you in the middle of the loading x). But the game is great, I have fun playing it and was really interested by the story! And it has a TRUE ending, you manage to do some cutscenes and that was really pleasant, nice work ^^