I agree with Kuro, that subs would be great for the musical sections, there's times when the English is hard to discern.  Please don't fade out before "Open your eyes" the fades are great but they feel like they're just too quick, cutting off stuff at the end of the musical pieces.  The game itself is very story heavy which means there's almost no mechanics.  I think you could put more in to represent life's struggles.  Overall, it felt a bit incomplete but that's just my opinion.  Also, I walked left at the very start and fell into oblivion!

Really though, well done!

It's really nice to see a narrative game in a game jam! This one is really well done, and achieves to deliver a quite touching story. And the music fits perfectly! It's not everyday we have lyrics in a game. Plus the use of vocals as main instrument is great.

I also enjoyed the visuals. The sens of progression, coupled with the character getting slower, is efficient. Although I found the platforming bit of thefirst level just a bit out of place (I don't find challenge to be necessary in this kind of game).

Overall, that was a great journey! Congrats.

Some of the music is a little hard to understand. Subtitles during the songs in between levels might make it easier to tell what's going on.