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A jam submission

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Sit down. Listen. Our story begins.
Submitted by DarkPixy — 1 hour, 31 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Enjoyment#33.6433.643
Audio#43.7143.714
Overall#53.6903.690
Concept#53.6433.643
Graphics#53.7143.714
Story#63.6433.643
Theme#63.7863.786

Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Did you use any optional theme? If so which one?

Didn't use an optional theme

What game engine did you use?
RenPy

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Comments

(+1)

Original style. Looking forward to new stories.

(+1)

I like the visual style and music in the novel

(+1)

cool! 

(+3)

Excellent novella. I would like to see the continuation of the story.

Submitted(+1)

Well, a chill night with two friends telling stories to each other rapidly, and unexpectedly, turned somber.

The drawings are very well made, as is the music, but the story lacks a bit of continuity, for my tastes at least. First it talks about a high school dance and then, out of nowhere, jumps to a different situation with one of them marrying a mortal.  Seems like a non-sequitur.  And i certainly did not expect what they intention was.  However, i believe that this is more an issue of my own reading preferences that your story.