Well, a chill night with two friends telling stories to each other rapidly, and unexpectedly, turned somber.
The drawings are very well made, as is the music, but the story lacks a bit of continuity, for my tastes at least. First it talks about a high school dance and then, out of nowhere, jumps to a different situation with one of them marrying a mortal. Seems like a non-sequitur. And i certainly did not expect what they intention was. However, i believe that this is more an issue of my own reading preferences that your story.