That was very good! Although i already suspected who would be /him/ at the end, that did not take out the intrigue of what would happen next.
For some reason, i kept imagining Elias as captain Holt from Brooklyn-99 :)
My only very very minor complain is that in scene transitions, when the image changes, i had the tendency to wait at the blank screen for it to show the next image, until i realized that i had to press space. And even after i learnt that, it happened once or twice.
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