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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Style | #138 | 3.222 | 3.222 |
| Game Design | #158 | 2.833 | 2.833 |
| Adherence To Theme | #163 | 3.111 | 3.111 |
| Originality | #189 | 2.833 | 2.833 |
Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Nice art style.
I actually like that there are two ingredients that look alike; keeps you on your toes! I see many people didn't enjoy that, so maybe differentiate them a little more. But keep them kinda similar!
Like everyone said, it would be good if there was more time to read the ingredients list before starting. I'm not sure adding a "read ingredients and press key to start" popup is a good idea, as it would make it too easy. But perhaps showing the ingredients in the center of the screen for a couple seconds with a beeping countdown and then moving them to the top and starting automatically.
EDIT: to add to the previous paragraph: It took me about 4 Game Overs to realise that there were certain ingredients I had to avoid. Because my eyes hadn't had time to read the top of the screen; the game had started immediately. That's another reason why I think centering the ingredients for a few seconds would be better.
I didn't like how much inertia the hand has, felt too slidey for me...
I liked the additional pizza-packing screen that allows me to add a more bonus points to my score the closer I hit the center of the box.
I really liked the music tracks!
thank you for the feedback! I really appreaciate you took the time to point everything you liked and didn't like, it means a lot. Hopefully when I have less stress from school, I'll get to improving the game.
Welp, i like it!
Fun to play, great pixels, great game!
Ahhhh keeping track of the toppings was difficult. Maybe give a slight buffer where you see the ingredients then try to load up the pizza. Fun though!
Surprisingly fun. A pizza with only mushroom and pepper sounds like a pizza I would eat xd
Thank you!
Hi! Intresting idea with pizza =) And art is very nice too. While I was playing your game several thoughts came to me:
- game over comes too fast, just after the first mistake;
- it would be more comfortable if you had to push some button to accept the list of ingredients before they start to fall down on your pizza)
- there are two different ingredients but with similar sprites - red circle. It's hard to differentiate them.
Thanks for your thoughts! It's nice to hear people enjoyed my art style :)
I agree that the gameover comes too fast. Kinda rushed it at the end because I thought the deadline was earlier by 12 hours and when I found it's not I was exhausted.
-I knowingly used two similar sprites, I hoped they weren't too similar, but I guess they are after all.
Again, thank you!
Love this game, cool gameplay, well done!
That's a fun little game, but it would be nice if we could see the items we were supposed to pickup before starting! good job :3
There aare two salamis that look the same
One has white dots and is pinkish, the other doesn't. Sorry if it wasn't clear enough
Looks good, but the gameplay is really boring. I wish you were to introduce more variety into it.
Thank you for the reply! What kind of variety do you think would have made the gameplay better? I rushed to submit because I thought the deadline was 12 hours earlier of what it actually was :). personally I considerd adding sometime an healthbar, drops which give you health, and pineapples that shoot from the sky that decrease your health.
Nice art style
thank you!