Wow, just wow. 

So, first, let me start by thanking you for this submission! I do recall your previous Tetris based story and its mad scientist ray guns- though I'll admit I didn't immediately realize you were the same author until reading your end card. Goes to show folks can have a range.

As for this story, I'll be honest in saying I was blown away. Maybe I just haven't taken time to sit with immersive fiction in a while, but I found myself getting drawn in and emotionally invested. I did read your content warning on game page prior to reading, which I appreciated- though that didn't keep my heart rate from climbing when the time came.

I'm being a bit vague here, as I really do hope others read your work. I wouldn't want to spoil the experience. I think your story certainly took the theme of connection seriously and has left me with a lot to ponder. We all seek out connection, trust, and intimacy. Yet, we can't have intimacy without also making ourselves vulnerable, in one way or another, be that emotionally or physically. You just can't have the tender intimacy of being held in another's arms without also being vulnerable to whatever harm they could possibly inflict on you, should they choose to betray your trust. 

TLDR:

I really enjoyed this submission and I found it emotionally moving, thoughtful in its reflection on trust and vulnerability, and keeping intricately tied with this Jam's theme. Bravo! - Also kudos to your vocal volunteers! Their contributions added another excellent layer to this experience.