Play Story
Beneath Winters Veil's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Horniness | #2 | 3.615 | 4.667 |
| Theme | #7 | 2.582 | 3.333 |
| Presentation | #7 | 2.066 | 2.667 |
| Uniqueness | #7 | 2.324 | 3.000 |
| Overall | #7 | 2.272 | 2.933 |
| Gameplay | #11 | 0.775 | 1.000 |
Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Use of the theme
The main protagonist wears stockings as a part of her attire - In earlier drafts there were also Christmas stockings adorning the mantle of the initial location
Additional notes
First interactive fiction and first time using Twine.
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Comments
Ooh that was lovely. Very well written. My first experience of Twine, so don't know if they are supposed to work like this, but got stuck in the credits and reloading the page takes you back to it. A back or a reset button would be appreciated, don't know if there's a keybind for it.
A very sensual story set in an intriguing fantasy world.
Ends a little abruptly and there was at least one inconsistency I spotted (they were outside but there's a bed? Maybe it's my mistake.)
If you use Twine again, consider adding a little branching to keep the reader involved, even if it's just the illusion of choice.
Thanks for sharing this wintery tale!