I love it, I love the way you describe how he focus in the fight, a harrowing moment just summarized in a dull pain, the touching moment in the mural ending with the mags was brilliant, he was jerked back to the reality in that instant, it was excellent

I loved the whole “over the top” element. Really sells the dehumanizing aspects of battle and war.

This was utterly enthralling; I'd happily read a whole book about 5th Platoon. Well done!

I especially like the scene with the mural. It gives a brief glimpse of what life used to be, could have been, before snapping us back to the harsh reality our characters live in.