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The Heist - OPR Writing Jam #11's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Adherence to Theme | #25 | 3.417 | 3.706 |
| Flow & Clarity | #35 | 2.874 | 3.118 |
| Overall | #37 | 3.127 | 3.392 |
| Concepts & Originality | #44 | 3.091 | 3.353 |
Ranked from 17 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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This is great. I enjoyed this Heist story. they got off much better than my character
That was a fun read, a heist gone wrong, which they seem to enjoy doing quite often.
It was tightly written, a good POV for moving the larger story along. I'm certainly interested in more of what happened. What the orb is. It's also a nice version of the HDF, doing things that isn't gloriously dying, mostly.
Nice job!
Much thanks for the compliments !
I might try and develop it further in the coming weeks, if I have the time to, feel free to follow and/or remind me later :)
You squashed a larger story into a small space really well. I enjoyed this
Thanks a lot man.
As said in the description, it's the first time I'm a part of their lil'jam session, I don't intend on winning anything but that gave me a good excuse to write !
A good excuse is the best excuse. I hope to see you in future ones!