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OPR Writing Jam #11

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A jam submission

The Heist - OPR Writing Jam #11View project page

A Grimdark Future short story.
Submitted by IshgarSeth — 45 minutes, 47 seconds before the deadline
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The Heist - OPR Writing Jam #11's itch.io page

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Adherence to Theme#253.4173.706
Flow & Clarity#352.8743.118
Overall#373.1273.392
Concepts & Originality#443.0913.353

Ranked from 17 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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EldenrowSubmitted155 days ago

This is great. I enjoyed this Heist story. they got off much better than my character 

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Something About Plans and First Contact Or; A “Ganger’s” First Robbery by R.K. Holmes
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OrangeCroweSubmitted156 days ago(+1)

That was a fun read, a heist gone wrong, which they seem to enjoy doing quite often. 

It was tightly written, a good POV for moving the larger story along. I'm certainly interested in more of what happened. What the orb is. It's also a nice version of the HDF, doing things that isn't gloriously dying, mostly.

Nice job!

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Distractions
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IshgarSethDeveloper156 days ago

Much thanks for the compliments !

I might try and develop it further in the coming weeks, if I have the time to, feel free to follow and/or remind me later :)    

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BuggrittSubmitted157 days ago(+1)

You squashed a larger story into a small space really well. I enjoyed this 

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One Last Chance
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IshgarSethDeveloper157 days ago(+1)

Thanks a lot man.
As said in the description, it's the first time I'm a part of their lil'jam session, I don't intend on winning anything but that gave me a good excuse to write !

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BuggrittSubmitted157 days ago(+1)

A good excuse is the best excuse. I hope to see you in future ones!

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