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Distractions's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Adherence to Theme | #34 | 3.129 | 3.211 |
Concepts & Originality | #37 | 3.232 | 3.316 |
Flow & Clarity | #38 | 2.770 | 2.842 |
Overall | #39 | 3.044 | 3.123 |
Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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The writing is fine but kind of started to feel like a lot of text between the turns of battle. The theme works, but didn't feel particularly dramatic anymore than the main character failing their goal- which didn't feel very consequential either. Like I say, the readability was good and premise was enjoyable- a three way cave battle between Snatchers, Squids and Rats? Fun!
No one expects the rats to literally be in the walls... go figure.
You've got a cool idea here, and I really liked the twist with the Ratmen showing up unexpectedly. It’s a neat way to throw a wrench in the works, and it definitely fits the theme. Some of the action was a bit tricky to follow, though—maybe just slow down a bit and let the scenes breathe. You've got something solid here, and with a little more polish, it could be even better. Keep at it!