Fairly well written with only a few grammatical errors with a pretty creative and engaging resolution.

Oh my gosh, that was funny. Not at all what I expected to read in this jam, kudos!

Excellent work! The character is engaging, and the twist is clever, Definitely one of my favorites so far!

Great and creative story with immersive descriptions! Loved the "copy of a copy" concept and am excited to see the pastry elemental mini for my HEF army.