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Very nicely crafted, and definitely nailed the theme!
This was great! Loved the concept and snapshot of the scene. Well written and enjoyable to follow!
Interesting plot twist, but the narrative could be clearer, at the end specially.
Thanks for the feedback! Could you elaborate on what wasn’t clear enough?
Nice with the reveal.
One of the highlights of the jam so far - an imaginative premise that you executed well. Jonathan falling under the Saurian's sway as he powers up his implants was a great moment.
The moment where the saurian explained his plan, was such a cool aha! moment.
The story was interesting, but I am not exactly sure what happened at the end. I do dig the idea of the Saurian using his own starvation to initiate his salvation. Very cool turnabout.
Thanks for your feedback, I have revised it to make it clearer.