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A jam submission

ShadowWithinView game page

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TmiWBlEFjv6gd8zmQVl7qVVsb_N2D7ePD1r7v4zUDV8/edit?usp=sharing
Submitted by loafingbread — 23 minutes, 33 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Theme#6533.0003.000
Artistic Style#9703.0003.000
Cleverness#14712.0002.000
Playability#14862.0002.000

Ranked from 1 rating. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • While I like your interpretation of the themes, and how they are to be implemented into your story and game, I find the playability to be a tad lacking, due to being able to face off against enemies, and practically win each fight in one hit. This includes the biggest enemy that blocks what I assume to be an important path to take for the main character. While I enjoyed listening to what music you did have, and found the art style to be aesthetically appealing , I would like to see more of this expanded on to fully grasp your intentions of the game and story overall.

Did you include your Game Design Document as a Google Drive link?
yes

Seriously... did you include your Game Design Document?
yes

Is your game set to Public so we can see it?
yes

Tell us about your game!
Pretty incomplete but the concept: Was to roam around your destroyed mindscape to recover the shadows/memories of yourself.

Extra Notes
It's unfinished and the game doesn't exit. The last door is a dead end.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

Neat concept. The environment is beautiful and the little dude is very cute. I can see where you were going with the game and I hope you get to finish it, it's a cool game!