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A jam submission

Pistol ShrimpView game page

Submitted by BoB — 3 hours, 50 seconds before the deadline
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Judge feedback

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  • The design document is organized and detailed. Concept for the game is very clear. Level design is well explained, along with sample images help to outline all the levels and their challenges. Art style is described and examples of both menus and assets are provided making it very easy to understand the stylistic intent of the project. The only thing missing would be a sense of the development timeline. I like the take on weaponry and your play on 'pistol' with the shrimps claw. Using the setting of a saloon/aquarium is fun and kinda goofy, it fits the intended style very well. The levels are designed well. There's an interesting variety of obstacles to bounce around and having some of them be destructible adds another level of strategy to the consideration of how to best use bullets. The bounce line feels very intense, visually, possibly turning it into a dashed line would lessen that 'weight'. Additionally, some of the objects assets are hard to distinguish as destructible. The bouncing physics worked well and the claws followed the indicated trajectory well. I did notice that the level would allow you to keep shooting after all bullets had been consumed. Adding a "boss" level was a really neat component. Not used to seeing that in this style of game. Lot of room for more levels and additional challenges and bosses.

Link to your Game Design Doc on Google Drive.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12MJ9ML4W5iJhoiH5_11yU2arO5O3mNWsoDyuHMa4cJw/edit?usp=sharing

Have you checked that your GDD is publicly accessible ?
Yes

Is your game set to public on itch.io so we can see it?
Yes

Summarise your game!
Pistol Shrimp is a Western/Shooter style game about a cannon-armed shrimp that wants to take revenge on the people that wanted to boil him for dinner!
The player can aim and shoot bullet that will ricochet on walls and obstacles, breaking weaker obstacles.
Controls: Mouse to Aim and left click to shoot.

Please explain how your game fits the theme:
You Are The Weapon: The protagonist is a pistol shrimp(Snapping shrimp) like his real counterpart he can shoot with his claw literaly turning himself a weapon and all he wants is revenge, turning himself into a weapon and toolto make it happen.

Is there anything you'd like the judges to pay particular attention to?
we would love to hear about implementation of the mechanics and game design(level design specially)

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

This is why I don't eat shrimps. they will get their revenge.

Submitted(+1)

Love the Sound Effects! What was a bit odd, was the last level, because you had no idea how many shots the boss would take. Also an option to toggle or even lower the volume of the sounds would be nice - maybe a more fitting BGM helps (cowboy-ish, western-like music). 

Was fun! :) 

Submitted(+1)

I love the art and sound on this entry, its really funny and it has a great charm to it. The bouncing indicator is great too, my only suggestion is to add an outline for breakable objects and when the bullet hits something which is able to be broken via the bounding indicator. Its quite fun, very good job! :)