I have no idea if this is a useful place to put this kind of thing, but looking for some feedback. I've been noodling round a "bow" theme. This is a draft. I suspect the BLOCK on the 1-handed Stance is extraneous, the flavour text is a bit bland, and I'm not sure there's enough room on a standard card to list the Focus effects, but apart from that....

Obviously the intent is you run around with the bow in your off-hand generating focus while doing something else with your other weapon, then switch to two-handed mode to unleash a barrage of arrows, then switch back to dodging about and staying at range until you have enough focus to fire again, but you could also just stay in two-handed mode if you have other ways of keeping your opponents at range.

Yeah this is really fun. I’ve played around with a ranged weapon but couldn’t think of a way to not make it OP. I think your “focus” could be a good way to balance it. I think it encourages the right kind of play, namely using it sparingly and in conjunction with a melee weapon. Reminds me of how I play hyper light drifter.