Thanks for the feedback so far everyone! I'm going to work on making the how to play a lot clearer and fix the UI. Not sure why things got all wonky on the upload. 

Nice presentation. Although the tutorial didn't really fit the entire screen so I had no idea how to play it. I just know wasd. S for somehow rolling and w for jumping.

Interesting intro and I like the glow, but the how to play screen was very hard to read, and I struggled to remember all the rules. Would have helped to spread them out across a few levels and introduce one at a time.

Very pretty! Good humor too. The presentation of this game is excellent, though I found the mechanics confusing

Loved the intro part, the whole retro style you had was really nice. I liked that there was some dialog as well, you don't see that often in a game jam game. I did find the controls a bit complicated at first, it was a bit hard to remember what the wall of text was saying at first. Other than that it's a very nice game.

Not sure if it’s just me, but the unity loader is just stuck at zero.