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A jam submission

Lament of SwanView game page

In the calm of the moonlit lake, the Swan Princess dances with grace.
Submitted by TTTinax, HuimingShi0111, Leolym, j%, episode42, Jasminezhang, Sallya_UwU, FawnTune โ€” 15 minutes, 33 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Aesthetics#64.5714.571
Story#114.0484.048
Enjoyment (Best Game)#713.4293.429
Sound Design#823.4293.429
Horror#923.2383.238

Ranked from 21 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

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  • Reminds me of a really finely done puzzle/escape flash and web game, which was all the rage a few years ago. This is very meticulously designed and has excellent art to support its eerie, gothic ballerina theme. Great work!

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Submitted(+1)

This game is so beautiful and I love the ballet aspect! Absolutely amazing work!

Submitted(+2)

This game boasts beautiful art and an enchanting world, which I found particularly appealing. The storyline offered a well-executed adaptation of the concept of the Black Swan. The tasks presented were intuitive and clever, adding depth to the gameplay. The cinematic intro and outro were nice touches, enhancing the overall experience.

The choice of scope for a seven-day jam was well thought out, as it allowed for the creation of a cohesive and engaging game.

However, I did feel that the absence of music during playtime was a noticeable omission. Adding a fitting soundtrack could further elevate the atmosphere and immersion within the game.

Overall big GG for the team, you made a very good entry for the jam!

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Thank you so much for sharing and we are glad you enjoyed it!

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Beautiful work! I really liked the interpretation here and specially the aesthetics. I got scared on the plants. I spent some time trying to understand the puzzles, specially the match stick one. My only bit of feedback would be to use a common button to action instead of 3 (Ender, Space and E). Overall a dope experience! Congratulations

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