excellent job giving me choices and then making it clear when they actually mattered later

She's still not wearing any clothes and is giving you a look that you associate with people who are about to have sex with you.

this line alone is worthy of pratchett, 10/10

This was fun! There's enough reactivity here to make repeated playthroughs interesting, which isn't always the case with Twine games. Good mix of fantasy tropes and horny content, too. Didn't notice too many typos - there's a few run-on sentences, but that's about it. Good job.

I enjoyed it! I like how your starting decisions affect the flow of the story. The narrative style with short scene descriptions focused on action is definitely one that I like. The game has a good pace  and enough variation to keep the player interested enough to try different routes. The dungeon environment is definitely a fun one to explore. Nicely done!