Quite the interesting premise and fun story from what was there already. Sadly though, I encountered the crashes and freezes it seems most other players encountered. Sometimes randomly, sometimes by going through dialogue too fast. There were a few errors with spelling and grammar and at times it was difficult to tell who was talking, but overall, it was the fun little story. ~

It's a neat idea and points to some more risque kinks, which is always appreciated.

I had crashes that kept me from advancing much, and it was sometimes hard to tell who was speaking without indicators on the textboxes. There's some grammatical errors which I can generally look past as a non=native english speaker myself, and the music has a clear repeat point instead of looping which can get a bit bothersome.

That said, the art was nice and the story seemed to be going to an interesting place, it was a good concept, cheers!

It freezes for me at “like what you see?” too. 

I like that there are some differences based on the choices you make including a bonus illustration. The dialogue box with the yellow on blue text is very difficult to read. There are lots of grammar, spelling and capitalization mistakes, and it's not always clear who is speaking. The game sometimes stutters when clicking through the text.

The art styles felt inconsistent to me with too many differences between the backgrounds and characters, and the music is somewhat mismatched to what's happening. I do like the designs, there just just needs to be a bit more tonal consistency to everything.

I think this game may have benefitted from being on an engine like Ren'Py which would have taken care of some of the issues. I know that developing your first-ever game never goes smoothly, but it's good to see you bravely taking that step!

Idk if it's happening to everyone else, but it looks like if you spam through the diolouge, the game crashes.