It freezes for me at “like what you see?” too.
I like that there are some differences based on the choices you make including a bonus illustration. The dialogue box with the yellow on blue text is very difficult to read. There are lots of grammar, spelling and capitalization mistakes, and it's not always clear who is speaking. The game sometimes stutters when clicking through the text.
The art styles felt inconsistent to me with too many differences between the backgrounds and characters, and the music is somewhat mismatched to what's happening. I do like the designs, there just just needs to be a bit more tonal consistency to everything.
I think this game may have benefitted from being on an engine like Ren'Py which would have taken care of some of the issues. I know that developing your first-ever game never goes smoothly, but it's good to see you bravely taking that step!