Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

• Nice work Axxis! I actually feel like I learned a bit from this project so the theme is absolutely on top. I liked the Grandpa character and became invested in the writing at the bakery. Honestly it was sweet and charming. The belly content was relatively short however and the ending was rather abrupt. Overall though, a nice short and sweet submission. Hope you keep making more projects! -Mark(Team Quimbly)
• Great little game! I love the Tintin art style, and I also enjoy the animations of the characters moving around. I had an issue with Hugo's dialogue where the text would disappear, and I found that very strange, but luckily I could just read the log. The game is short, so most of the focus should be on the belly content, but it doesn’t feel like it is. It seems like that was added in later and wasn’t the main focus. I like the idea of mistaking ounces (oz) for pounds (lbs), but it was too little, too late, with only one CG for each character. They don’t do much sexually either—they just get full, and that’s all. There’s no flirting, no touching, nothing. The dialogue, however, is great it’s very cute. I almost feel like this game would be better without the belly content and just as a love story. Thank you so much for joining this year’s Belly Game Jam!
• The word that came to me when playing was: Charming. This game is absolutely adorably charming! I wish I could have rated it higher in terms of its gameplay but with only one choice I sadly wasn't able to. Everything else about it though was very nicely done. The world was simple and beautiful and the characters were wonderfully distinct. The writing was quite good overall, very few spelling and grammar errors. The music choices were on point! With a little more time in the oven, really baking in the flavours of the characters and expanding the story and accentuating the writing style, I think this could have been even better! Well done!