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Yo. Sorry but no.
https://go-yukkuri.itch.io/deep-born/devlog/809621/good-and-bad-news

(Played to Jam version)

Really good writing.

We are launched into a dark story with a disillusioned character in the sewers of his life. I won't say anything more about the story. The atmosphere is good. Sometimes without music, sometimes just a soundtrack. There is no flourish or exaggeration. We feel the protagonist who has already seen too much and yet this surprise. The art has a sacred character. Black and white, the color is even more striking when it slaps us in the face. We would think we were in Sincity.

If I had to give just one negative element it is that at this level it is more of a story than a game, even if we have some interactions. Anyway I had a good time and I am waiting for the sequel. Although not a fan of Furry your story intrigues me. Good luck and see you soon I hope.

Good point:
-Awesome title screen
-Nice music.
-Song used for dialogues well chosen.
-Diagonal movement walking + running. So Character with 48 frames minimum (and i dosent count the swollen belly frame).
-Humor and writing that hits the mark.
-Full art!

Point to review.
-Title screen not yet perfected. Several buttons can appear pressed at the same time.
-To short.

Final point of view:
There would have been just a little more story and if you had had the time to do the combat system I'm sure you could have been in the final top 12.The atmosphere and the music match very well.And even if the decor is perfectible, they have an undeniable personality.

Sad that you didn't go further in the competition. Really good work.

Yo.

Nice little game. Simple but effective art and equally good gameplay. I think however that given the speed of some series you are asking for too high a level of precision.

I will be interested to see how it evolves. Good work.

Finished with 102 points.

-There is a bug that can send an ingredient to the right and if it disappears, there is only one ingredient left that bounces.

-I saw the appearance changes at 25 and 50 points.

-It can be interesting to start with a single ingredient and increase the difficulty with 2 then 3 ...

-Think about bonuses or penalties that slow down or aggravate the player.

-Sometimes it is not possible to recover 2 elements at the same time. It may be necessary to review the generation of their speed and their jump. Being able to have them fruit like a "pong" could be good.

I like the art. The world I feel like I've already seen it. lol. For the background I think it's good. It allows you to decorate but without being too visually disturbing. So he does his job well.

Nice game. A good challenge. but I couldn't finish it. After arriving in the kitchen the game froze with the impossibility of respawning with R. A good challenge. but I couldn't finish it. After arriving in the kitchen the game froze with the impossibility of respawning with R. when I returned to the menu I was asked to resume at level 2. Sorry I was lazy. The collection is also very difficult. the white floor of the kitchen is a bad idea with the yellow balls. we don't even know where the balls come from. Otherwise it's nice.

Yo

Short is quite predictable. The art is nice and clean.
The black and white side gives an identity to the games. The story would make you want to know more but it lacks content.

Thank you for your work.

Yo.

Nice Gamplay.

I think you should make the camera follow the hero. The game system makes you want to discover more with more spells and possibilities.
However I find it very incomplete to be put in the Jam. Just a small level with a small story could have done the trick but without that it is not in the theme of the Jam. Too bad because frankly I find the gameplay very correct and all your mechanics seem to work. I wish you do not get discouraged.

I send you power and say you good work!

Thank you very much!!! I don't know if you have time to play the first version. If not I'm sorry to have to keep you waiting. Hopefully it will be great when you play it. I will do everything to ensure that your wait is rewarded. Cya. :)

Korin.

Thank you very much. Sorry for being pushy. I totally understand the ups and downs of life.
I had a few problems myself that made me want this Rating.
As I said, I'm not here to review the rankings. All that matters is the feedback.
And the current ranking suits me very well (except for Doctrix and echozard but that's just my point of view).
I don't know if it matters to him, but don't forget the 20th. He too has the right to constructive feedback.

Again, thank you very much. Having tested all the games I know it's not easy. And don't worry, there are no hard feelings.
I wish you peace and only good things. :D

For first I say congratulations to the winners. Having played and commented on all the Jam games, I understand why they are in their place.
I don't come here to contest the places and please believe that my congratulations are sincere.

(Sorry i put that here, i duno were i can put that...)
However, I will soon withdraw my game from the competition and before that I would like to have my 3rd rating.
I've been waiting since the notes came out trying to make up my mind but I can't do it.
Despite the 7th place if no one posts a comment it's because they don't deserve it (for exempl, i think  EcoHazard and Doctrix are better than mine). I imagine that's also why the 3rd judge didn't rate me. I can understand. It must also be the same for the 20th games. But sorry i want to know my 3rd rating. To much work for leave without know.

I want nothing else. Thank for your understanding.

Re-Re-Re-Re uploaded. lol
If you have any problem dont hesitate to ask.  I will send a mega link directly.
But until Wednesday. So don't hang around too much.

It's come again. You have 3day befor he leave. But but to become better.

Thank you  for our interest. :). But i think that he is way overrated. II will post more information when the situation becomes clearer. Thank you again and sorry. ^^

Yo.
Yes I know. For some reason I have decided to remove the game for an indefinite period.

Yo.

It was very hard for me to play. The story is interesting. The music is really good.
But I didn't get far because of a bug in the first fight. The atmosphere is good and the interface helps with the atmosphere. Sorry I can't say more because I didn't go very far.

Thank for your work and you game. :)

Yo
Really nice story. 3d CG is not mi  favorite type of art but that work.  And the story is so captivating that I forgot about 3D. I like how you did your background too.  You also have an interesting background.

For Gamplay it's mostly about choice.  I don't know if it changes much in replayability but it makes you want to restart the game.
I know you dont have much time. But I was a little sad not to have music (maybe a bug.)

Thank for you work i really lost a lot of time because I had a good time. Cya for update or another game. :3

Yo.
You have a good art. Very Clean. You have a good bacground to.  it gives legitimacy to the combat system.
The map is not really work. But that work.
The combat system is interesting. You use you PM barre like mana and shield.
Even if the base remains the same, The changes make it something unique.
Nice work.
All music are Rpg maker or not?  I liked the battle music and i nerver hear it befor.

Well done. Thank for your work and you game. Cya for updat or next project.  ^_^

Yo. Ho mi... that it's  great

Story: Beautifull. you take to show baby blues, abuse. You gave real depth to your characters. I loved it.
Nice cinematique To at the biginig and epilog to.

Unlock other gamplay by sign you buy is a good idea to.
And your game play are really exotic and full of inventiveness.
Lot of good idea. I was really goodly impressed.
Effect with blinded character (no spoil)... so nice.
Creat a Random customer system is great!

If I can say something is:
-you misical transition are really hard.
- Massage : To much information for easy mode but the gamplay is cleaver.
-Sewing: The game start to fast for prepar ouself. I recommend a timer before launching. (3/2/1 go)
After few attempt. I laughed out loud thinking about it "Deja vue -Initial D"
-Nature: Really nice bit some animal are really hard to see. ont each frame by session.
-Piano : Mode insane.... ARE YOU SERIOUS?  XD

I really take mi time and i really love this experience.
Thank for for this good time, for your work and your game.
Hoping not to wait until next year for your next project.. Cya ;)

Yo. A interesting concept.

I like you art, your character and you story.
The game is really easy to learn and play.
I thing you need balancing . 3500 baby at day 160 it's a little bit. XD
Dont worry i dont forgot it's a concept. I think you can put a good scenario, some other guirl and other room with.
If you univers its really close about Furry, you can go to other way like egg or duplication.

Anyway all that to say that it's good work and it gives ideas.

Thank for you work, concept and time. Waiting your next move. ;3

Yo!

A vampire survivor Like. Nice. The gamplay work.
Its a little painful in beggening with the speed and power to useless but with some patience we can did it!
Art of map can be better, But the  character art is great.

-I see the chest. Really nice to. nice mecha in 1.13 but if you continue you project, i think you  should find your own mechanics. I know is not easy, But it would be sad if it was just a copy of vampire survivor.

But it's just a tip. And it was fun. :3

Thank for your Work and you game. Need to see how you creation evolve. :)

Yo!

Why did they hurt this poor lady? XD
I joking. But the game (and i think is not wat you want... i hope so) is really rude with the women. Idea is great for take care of her. But i broke anything just bi a click. XD
Phisics is great, really great, but i think you need to give more weight to your model.
It remains a concept that could make an interesting game.

Thank for your work and you game. Cya. :)

Yo.
Not easy first time but it's good. This kind of game can be really adictive. Like "Yes, your grace". The art is nice and the story is interesting. I just want more of it. Good game I had a good time.
Juste one thing Throne are VERY powerfull. To powerfull. You can win only with it. But you can't win without it.

Thank for you game, your work and your time. I wait for your next work. :3

Yo. Nice. This little cinematic is funy. the game is short but you have a good physics.
Nice idea for all new enemis at each level

For recomandation Pennigar said all. But if you want to continue on shout them up style, I  design the R-type series an Parodius (if you duno). You can find a lot better shoot but for me they are the most inventive. You can find a lot of idea like maze and changed traveling during game.

Thank for your work and your game. Cya.

Yo. Really nice. Good gameplay, fun, and with challenges.
But the difficulty is a bit high for a start.
And call me the manager. Who is the donkey who puts 1 chair in one direction and 4 in the other.? XD
Dw that just a joke. :3. But be care. It smells like forced difficulty. And some troll let's not be embarrassed to point it out unkindly.
Apart from that, that was Really nice like i alraidy said. Clean art, nice challenge and nice gamplay.

Thank for your work and your game. :3

You took the time to post a project. It is out of respect for your determination that I wanted to honor you. Don't worry about your humor. Personally I have no lessons to give you. My first try with RPG maker was worse on this score.  I'm just warning you that other communities won't be as careful as ours.

And for finish i wait your next project. Good work for next.

It's done. If you have any problem don't hesitate. I will link to another download.

Yo. I tested it and it's work for me. But dont worry. If you can juste wait a little i'm going to upload a news version enterly rewrited.
Let me just 1 or 2 hour and it's good. :D

I cant' touche this first version for the jam. I duno if i can reupload it.
See you later. :)

Yo.

Really nice. Juste be carefull at the begining.
-I like the story. I need to see how that can be evolve.
-You art is really attractive. I really like you main character. the other character to. I can feel an entire univers.
I really want to see this world.
-You music is good. You have some sound effect. Very nice. Juste, damage SE are really painful when it spam like that XD
-You can skip all the pick part with wall jump. Duno if it's wat you want but it's possible. The Wall jump is very strong.
-I was soft lock like other but i see the temple (back to 2nd point. lol)
-Bananaconda are totaly thrue. One this game Imunity frame is the life.
-You need to see the range of you jump. it's to big for a first stage.
-And the attack dont follow your character all the time.

Your game is promising. I really wait for more.
Thank for your work and your game. I really hope to see the next updat. :)

Yo. 35 coin.
Sadly  that crash a lot. It remind me "Peper boy" in Atari, but more trash.
The Art remind me the Ps1 graphic to. So Nostalgic.
Very nice and fun but like i said befor, that crash a lot.

Thank for your work and you game. I had a good time. XD

When i heard the opening music i said to myself  "A man of culture". But after playing. lol. I duno.
I'm guilty, i laughed to. But it's hard sometime.  There is a difference between funny and rude.
But i'm not here for that.

For a first project it's not bad. I like to see you practicing cinematic with sprit. On event -> In page 2 -> juste bellow Animation = you can find emoticon. that can help you for feeling of you character.
When you Tp  a character, dont forget to put in the right direction when it reappears. Same during Cinematic.
It's a very little detail but trust me, that work. :3
You already put you hand one battle system for talking and creat scripted combat. That great.
I would like to see how you progress.

Welcom in Rpg maker. Thank for your game and your work. cya. ;3

Off cours. But how can i contact you in discord? Or i can send you mine if you want.
(sorry if is not a creation softwar or a game i'm very bad.)

Hello. Of cours. But its not favoritism? We can change the game from the moment we posted it?
If it's ok i ready for all work that need. English is really not mi first langage. ^o^;;;;;

Yo. Very short, but it remind us that is not just about big belly when we talk about motherhood or being pregnant.
It is also a woman who becom a mother and who give birth to a whole human.

Yo. Very nice idea. Couple the platform to the puzzle game using the jump constraint it's very clever.
Your art is still good like your other game.  But the point that touched me the most is the musique.

I have not really a lot of thing to say. Your game is one of the accomplished of this Jam.

Thank for your work and you game. Cya for the next. :3

Yo. Really good. REAAAAALLLY GOOD.
Good gamplay, You have you art identity. I see a song button but i hear nothing. Perhaps a bug.
Good balance on skill. If i have only one thing to say, it's maybe a little hard for a begining.
In skill you have a lot of thing you can add. Defence, incrase speed, reduce speed, incrased gold... For enememis you can creat suicide bot or other you need to follow first cause he heal other.
It's juste idea cause i think you follow the right way for your project.

It has a feel of a real game.

Thank for you game and you work and cya for next updat. :3

Yo. Really good phisics on your character.
The gamplay is simple but it work. I see the subtle improvment when you use some ingredient each other.
But i dont already understand mechanic.  To make a profit you cook you need to observe the result. That a good point. But i think you can creat a limite.
For now you can juste give all you want without really thinking.
Maybe if your wife lose belly when you dont give us want she need, or a reason for a game over, you can
encourage the player to pay more attention to their menu.
It's just mi opinion. Nothing els. :D

For art you monster are really well. This game is really not mi thing but i can see the work on it.

Thank for your work and your game. ^^

Yo. I like you art and your character. You music is nice to.
Your map is not really on the same mood. It spoil a bit the atmosphere
I whould i have to the outline of the story.
Your fighting system is interesting. You can creat you own strategie and replay with other if you want.
But i think yoo need to review the balancing.

Thank for you work and your game. I wait the next updat. :D

Yo. really good begining. Base of the stori is great and the pregnancy are really justified. Music is nice and graphiqu is really unique. I really want to see wat hapen next. Im really intrigate with this gamplay in begining on the winter.

Thank for this view of your game and cya for the upgrad. :3

Yo. Some classical working gamplay.
The art is good and belly is on of the better i ever see until now on the jam.
But for a short game i dont think give solution is a good idea (is juste mi opinion).
Even more in die and retry game and you dont have game over.
Sprite size is a little weird to.
No bug. Plaisant game.

Thank for your work and your game. :)