I feel the music doesnt fit, but its not jarring. Really nice linking of mechanics and story - The fact that the forced fail-state is something that you are angered by the first time, but learn to accept it by the end is just such a clever move, I wish Id thought of it.

Audio loop is boring i agree, but it's all i could manage to make with my limited music skills unfortnately. Thanks for playing :)

Interesting game - good concept, really good looking graphics. Audio loop is a little boring and you could more balance shape's behaviour - random speed and move order is a little irritating for me :> Which does not change the fact that you made original entry. ;]

There is also a web build available here.

One thing I really didn't like was how well it resonated with some things currently bothering my mind. It was like playing personal life :)

Other than that it was great!

Love the poem, nice game. I included it in part 1 of my Public Domain Jam compilation video series, if you'd like to take a look :) http://youtu.be/FT-bP4jDHz0