My Submittal for the Tyranobuilder Jam 2017 - a DEMO of a larger project

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Please - I know its a "longshot" but take a look at my Visual Novel and give me feedback - after a DISASTOROUS premiere on Steam Greenlight ( 8 Yes 38 No) I decided to go back to work on this one.....any Feedback would be awesome and appreciated for the next 2 year gap between Jams when I can really get good at this Engine (Ive been at it for 2 weeks).

Anxo GamesSubmitted7 years ago (1 edit)

I liked the story, it looks really interesting.

Some suggestions:

Put only 1 start.
Watch this video and follow the steps presented, your story will get even better.
Tell the player about NSFW scenes.
Use a better 3D RENDER, if you want to use only drafts use this site, this site or this site.

anilcsrao17 years ago

many thanks - really appreciate the feedback

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★ TyranoBuilder Spring Game Jam 2017! ★

My Submittal for the Tyranobuilder Jam 2017 - a DEMO of a larger project