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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Quality | #14 | 2.535 | 3.000 |
Creativity | #14 | 2.874 | 3.400 |
Overall | #16 | 2.479 | 2.933 |
Coherence to the Theme | #17 | 2.028 | 2.400 |
Ranked from 5 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Difficulty Level
Beginner
For those who have just started composing
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Ok is rough on the edges all over the place, still sounds fine tho, but my main point would be if u settle the room. this ambient space of yours, u need to move it a bit. Play around with revebs/delays on all the tracks u got along the way, fading in/out etc and you'll see how much more live this room can get.
Super useful to know. Thank you!
The low drone is really cool, but it definitely gives off "inside a spooky cave" or something ominous like that. The melody is pretty cute, good for love song
Thank you!
Bells seem a bit dissonant. Low pad provides an ominous tone to the piece. Pitch bend was cool. Song successfully creates a creepy vibe.
Thank you for the specific feedback! I'm new to this so it's super helpful.
The bells being off was "on purpose" but I know that "I was trying to be a smartass" is not that good of an excuse. I'm learning!
I actually wasn't criticizing the dissonance in the bells, merely making a note of it. Dissonance can be an effective tool at times to create tension, as it does in this song.
Oh, okay, got it. Thank you so much!