Likes:

+ Fun story, and having different endings is cool.

+ Rolling is an interesting alternative to walking in a platformer (Though it does lend itself to some jank)

Dislikes:

- Camera is way too zoomed in and moves way too slow for a platformer. Changing the aspect ratio for the game and the interpolation speed would solve a lot of my gripes with this game.

- It's not super clear where you should be going most of the time (Not helped by the camera)

I would love to see some more mechanics in a game like this. There are a thousand platformers out there, so you should always be asking what makes yours unique and why are you making it? The story is a great start at answering that question, but GAMEplay is a huge part of a video GAME! Don't be afraid to shake it up a little and break out of your comfort zone to make your games more meaningful and unique to you!