You have a gift for writing. The story flowed well and you maintained a consistent voice throughout. I enjoyed that each area had different encounters and it wasn’t repeated beats in every direction.
Only suggestion would be to give the player more choices for responses. After I clicked on the direction, it felt like a while until I got to make a decision again.
Overall really solid piece. I’d guess your theme is “let love find you,” or “there is more to life than love.” Was I close?