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This was a very interesting game, though at least in its current incarnation it is really more of a visual novel. It's also very incomplete when it comes to the visuals, and I really wanted to see some of those visuals. That said, the dev has stated up front that they had to focus on story in order to make the deadline, and in that regard I think they succeeded admirably. The story does reach a solid stopping point, and hangs together well until then, though I certainly hope there are plans to continue it on further. One gripe, though, involves our MC's mentor before, who admits her feelings for him before he unceremoniously disappears from her life forever. Honestly, it left a bit of a bad taste in my mouth. I say either have her acknowledge his feelings but keep things fully platonic, or bring her in somewhere down the line, perhaps as a request the MC makes to the goddess after the current events of the story have played out. As it is, it's a loose thread that feels both unnecessary and slightly cruel. Speaking of slightly cruel, I see the story value of having the one sister desire big boobs and get a huge ass instead, but as I am more into boobs myself, I felt her pain. Anyway, I think this is a tremendous start, and I look forward to a more complete and updated rendition of the game.