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Heyo 

Loving the story, really, the slow pacing and building is healing. 

There's just a thing that I kinda dislike, even if I kinda get why you had to do it ( there are a lot of games that risked the shut down cz char were to child-like), but that changing on Jun in the new version piss me of. She was different to all the girls, she was a precious with that short hairs and she was also petite, now she's canon with all the others and I feel like she lost part of her personality :c.

Just wanted to point it out as other has done but as a positive criticism. 

Nevertheless the writing on the game is top notch, and the story is so original that I've devoured it, so keep it on cause it's marvelous 👌

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Hey there,

first of all, thanks for the comment. It's much appreciated.

Well, believe me, in a perfect world, I'd have left Jun as she was (sans character growth etc.) but we're not living in a perfect world, so I did what I had to do.
However, I feel like saying that she's like all the others now isn't really fair, cause a) it implies that the others are all the same and b) it implies that Jun was nothing more than her young-ish visuals. She's still the same girl, just in a slightly more appropriate frame.

That being said, I'd suggest just giving her a chance, cause I personally feel like the change to her visuals wasn't detrimental to her as a character - it rather emphasizes her personality in my opinion. She has some more screen time in the next update, which hopefully can show that off a bit more.

Again, thanks for the comment, though. :)

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Oh sorry, I didn't mean to say that all char are the same abs offend your work, that isn't the case. 

Clearly every char, gurls and Bois too, has a personal story and a way to see things that is really interesting. 

It was mainly for aesthetic since she seemed petite and innocent. But again, nevertheless I can't wait to play next update! 

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It's all good, mate. I get what you're saying. But since her looks were the problem to begin with, there wasn't much I could've done besides doing what I did.

Next update is coming along nicely! It's gonna be out sometime this month. :)