I appreciate that you took the time to make your own artwork! I like the big, expressive eyes on the sprite.
I did have a bit of trouble figuring out what was happening, but that is likely due to this being a part of an existing series. It makes it a bit harder to work as a standalone story. It's a difficult tightrope to walk to have enough exposition for the story to work on its own without completely rehashing or spoiling the existing stories ( I did the same for my first May Wolf Jam entry, and had the same issue, so you're in good company here).
I didn't actually notice the 'A Reverse 3 Story' on the title page until I went to review this, partially due to my not-so-great eyesight. Small reverse text on faded out light teal is a bit hard to see. Maybe a dark teal outline or shadow around it would make it stand out a bit better? The entire time reading it, I felt I was missing something important, but wasn't sure what. Now it makes a bit more sense.
Thank you for taking part in the game jam! I look forward to seeing what you have in store for the future.