Quite cool to have a zine adaptation of such a famous essay! I haven't read the original, but I enjoyed having an overview of it through your zine. It was quite interesting.
The only issue for me was that some pages were difficult to read when the texte was in red or above images. Maybe I missed something because of this, but I think it would have been nice to have a clearer link between capitalism and fascism as a conclusion/perspective, even if it was from your reflexions and not the original author's (while precising the change of narrator of course).
Anyhow nice job!