Leon and Nico are so sweet, cautious yet still comfortable/eager with each other. I feel the descriptions are effective, especially when they move furniture, or become engulfed in fur/breaths. I was half-expecting Leon to accidentally walk into a growing wall of fur in the dark, or Nico’s green tint to be illuminating. I’m hoping for a fun, future foreshadowing description of Nico’s shadow growing on the wall as he gets closer to the light. Like the pacing, and the slight tease as Nico’s sprite moves to show a bit more, bit less, and back to the reveal.