Congrats on finishing the thing! I had a few thoughts while reading:
- Interesting premise. I almost wanted the cyberfighting to be a super black market thing where the police were trying to track it but, since there was no physical location, it was much harder to stop.
- The openness of the world is interesting. I would have liked to see how I might play through some of the suggested game modes..... WAIT, pg 11. Got it. Nice.
- Not entirely sure on the nature of teams in this one... Are all the players on the same side? Are the players killing one another? Just not totally sure.
- Not sure how combat works?
- The subscribers is VERY CLEVER. Like that a ton.
You've done a good job at taking a Fortnite style and adapting it into an RPG. What I would suggest at this point--strip some of your things back, build the base game, and then build expansions.