This was one of my favorite entries I've read so far. Here are a few thoughts I had while reading:
- I love that you focus on a female centered setting! It kind of reminds me of a My Brightest Diamond song She Does Not Brave the War. Actually, just here is the song! But I do feel like the women might be the REAL heroes... which is a clever way to go about the prompt.
- Great job on the concept the consent and consideration section. I might even include something related to the Bechdel Test for players who may be unfamiliar.
- The setting is beautiful and reminiscent of Studio Ghibli films... just wow.
- So, your tarot system I like but I worry about how often a player would need to reference the tables. Obviously, players who have more familiarity with the tarot would be best fit for the role of Invoker.
- The scenario creation is the jewel here. Especially in the examples you give. On future updates, I might front load one of these examples. Because these are the hooks for your game!
- Wasn't sure how the players get action cards? Found it, but had to go back and find it in character creation. Maybe reiterate it in the action section.
Yeah this is great. AMAZING Amazing job!