I love the idea, however theres some problems with the game(keep in mind that I simply cant play to the end of the demo-the ball):
What its good:
Concept
Writing
Characters desings (the ones that I could see)
Major issues:
Backgrounds and characters images not loading
Game crashing
Unnable to play the mini games (loading images/crashing issues)
Repeating scenes and not let me choose the same dialogue alredy choosen-If this was supose to be a game mechanics is a bad one
Minor nitpick:
I particularly dont like the option : choose your type of villainess(meek,close the original,innocent,etc) for two reasons:
1.This choose does bassically nothing (dont lock dialogues,characters still treat you more or less the same,etc)
2.The type of villainess the player chooses portray is better demonstrate on the rest of the dialogues/choices, if you wanna the palyer see how theirs villainess is progressing why not put a personality bar in the game ? This way feels less constriged.