Thank you for your review! You're quite right about the speech aspect, and honestly it would have been easy for me to implement.
I have a lot of issues with panic attacks, and my main symptoms are tremors, stuttering and difficulty focusing enough to be able to speak. I actually have a character in another vn I'm working on that has that issue.
I'll be honest, I was more focused on learning HOW to make a vn during the jam, rather than the story itself, so they're all a bit rough. This one I think was my favorite concept, though, hence my desire to try and fit it in.