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Interesting premise and take for the concept of personal purgatory. I'm not gonna comment too much on the technical aspects because it's a two-days work so I can understand why some parts are a bit rough around the edges. But the fact that you use custom backgrounds, albeit simple, is already great. You have two more entries I have yet to read, which (I believe) are a better reflection of yours, I might go deeper into those.

My only grip, is that Al spoke too coherently for someone who was in an extreme emotional state (anger and sorrow). If you're distressed, you would most likely speak a bit incoherently/with a bit of stutter. That's it!

Replay Video is an impressive and enjoyable product of a project, especially considering everything was put together within only two days!

Thank you for your review!  You're quite right about the speech aspect, and honestly it would have been easy for me to implement.

I have a lot of issues with panic attacks, and my main symptoms are tremors, stuttering and difficulty focusing enough to be able to speak.  I actually have a character in another vn I'm working on that has that issue.

I'll be honest, I was more focused on learning HOW to make a vn during the jam, rather than the story itself, so they're all a bit rough. This one I think was my favorite concept, though, hence my desire to try and fit it in.