This feels like a project with a lot of potential and a lot of heart behind it, albeit one that would probably have benefited a lot from more time if it hadn't been made during the Jam. There are definitely some rough edges. The lack of music and a few places where the text boxes are tagged with the wrong character's name, or with a character's name when it should be the narrator's voice, stand out in particular.
That said, there's a lot to enjoy with the sprite work and CGs. Colton is a charming wolf who a reader wants to get to know better, and music or not the writing does a good job establishing the feel of the jazz club. It's quite an enjoyable read even with the editing hiccups.