I have just finished reading this vn (which is the seventh I read from this jam btw). These are my thoughts.
To begin with, I was left intrigued by the end of the story. This vn turned from what I initially thought would be an epic fantasy vn set in nowadays Rome to a plot you'd swear would be fitting for an action movie (a furry action movie...but not in a Beastars way).
Regarding the visuals and audio choice, I concur with ErebusWulfe. With minimally modified pictures you managed to build a coherent atmosphere of mystery I believe is highly suitable for this VN.
Concerning theme implementation, I concur with ErebusWulfe again. I feel like the story struggled to convey its interpretation of expansion, yet to an extent it could be given a pass since the game is incomplete.
That's what I think of this vn. Will the game be updated once the jam ends?