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Hola. ¿Con novela te referís a novela onda un libro, o novela visual?

This is what the world needed.

Che, como escritor de una novela visual (furry) ambientada en Argentina, banco.

Me quedé trabado en el inicio después de que terminara el diálogo del prólogo. ¿Ahí termina o qué?

NOVELA VISUAL ARGENTINA

Como escritor de una novela visual furry ambientada en Argentina, me parece fantástico.

First we have Bee Movie, then we have Bee FVN.

I will read this later on.

As it seems, there is a new furry visual novel jam taking place. In fact, its submission phase has just started! I guess I am going back to my role as a voracious fvn jam reader and rater.

This will be my first subject of review. Get ready!

Para mí que Martín y Furia llegaban a la final pero se fueron antes.

En primer lugar, te felicito por checar las novelas del MAY WOLF 2024 y apoyar a la furrobanda. Sos genial.

Segundo: Francia

Tercero: De hecho, cuando jugué Password al principio pensé "es como si unos furros estuvieran en Gran Hermano". Luego ví lo que pasó después y XD.

Cuarto:

Del Moro: ¡ESTO ES GRAN HERMANOOOO!

Furia: A BANCARSELAAAAAA

35th VN

34th VN. Liked how chats felt. The ending was lit!

33rd VN I will read and rate from this jam.

Edit 1: Just, wow.

32nd VN I wI'll read and rate from this May Wolf 2024 FVN JAM! Here we go!

Edit 1: A wholesome, cute game. Fuck that otter.

31th VN I read and rated from this jam. This is so Psycho spiral beast core.

31th VN I will read and rate, here we go!

Edit 1: A bit rushed. Liked the special effects.

30th VN I will read and rate from this Jam. Here we go!

Edit 1: fifth VN in less than three hours. Attack on Titan but furry. 

29th VN I read and rated from May Wolf 2024. This is so badminton ace core. The vore...lol

28thvn I read and rate from May Wolf 2024 FVN JAM. Cute and original. 

28th vn I read and rate from May Wolf 2024 FVN JAM. Cute and original. 

27th VN I will read and Rate from May Wolf 2024

27th VN I will and rate (at light speed).

Edit 1: Just read it. Big brother but with dates. I felt like the VN wanted to eat more than it could bite, but it might be more fleshed out in future updates.

26th FVN I will read and rate from this jam. Here we go!

Edit 1: Ok. I have just read it in 10 minutes. Cute.

Time for Apathesis! 25th VN I will read and rate from this jam, here we go!

Edit 1: Interesting. No time for review comment now. Let's rate.

So...your VN is next in my list. So...24th VN I will read and rate from this jam, here we go!

Edit 1: Ok, I have just finished reading Roy's route. The relationship dynamics were portrayed in such a way it felt ... idk how to say it ... real? Presentation was nice. Story was a creative subversion of the May Wolf trope.

Those are my thoughts on this VN. Thanks for the experience!

Ah yes, the one with the serval! 23th VN I will read and rate from this jam, here we go!

Edit 1: I have just read and rated this entry. It was cute. It was interesting how you managed to tell the story without a minuciously-descriptive narration, making it feel more like the thought train of an actual person. Liked how you implemented many cool ren'py features such as animations and moving sprites, which I believe gives you presentation points. However, the music sometimes didn't fit the moment and the sprites could have used some tweaking (I get it though, I am not expecting people to come up with extremely fancy sprites in just a month). The story sometimes feel rushed, but sort of...real? at the same time.

I saw the What We were Wolf reference in the mall poster.

Those are my thoughts in this VN. Thanks for the experience.

So today we are reading another entry from JMJerbear, huh? I remember this was one of the first submissions of this jam. 

22th VN I will read from this jam, READY, SET, GO!

Edit 1: I have just finished reading this VN. I loved the dad's monologue, truly. It kind of felt like an actual dad telling his son about his past. A touching story and game, you could say. For something made in four days, I admit it's pretty decent.

Later on I might be coming with a review comment. Thanks for the experience!

Congratulations! You got a new reader!

21th VN I will read and rate from this jam, here we go!

Edit 1: I have just finished this. Things really picked up, huh? Later on I might come with a review comment, but not now as I am in a hurry to read and rate all the entries (at least the non late-qualified ones) before May Wolf ends.

You are welcome (also, thanks for the furry coati representation. There are many of those in South America).

What the f-. There are multiple endings???

19th VN I read and rated of this jam. Soon I might be coming back with a review comment. It reminded me of Echo (I can see why you mentioned the Echo Project in the credits).

20th VN I read and rated of this jam. Soon I might be coming back with a review comment. It was conventional but goodly executed. A pleasant enough read.

B o l o g n a s a u c e

(Which was actually supposed to be bolognese sauce)

This is the rare occasion I decide not to go by submission order (cuz this one is short enough to cram up). So 18th VN I will read and rate here we go!

Edit 1: ._.XD . I have just finished reading this VN. It was something. Just rated, too.

Your review will wait a bit as I am trying to read as many VNs as possible today. Cheers!

Damn. I am sorry.

17th VN I will read and rate, here we go!

Edit 1:

Edit 2: Ok, I have just rated, but I am trying to cram up as much VN's as I can today, so your review will wait a little.

15th submission I will read and rate here we GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

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Sorry, I couldn't resist.

Edit 2: Ok, I have just read and rated your VN. Here are my thoughts.

I can't write this VN without pointing out how great the visuals and music are in this VN. There are custom sprites and CG's that give off some kind of eerie vibe that's quite fitting for this story. Same goes for the UI, really. Without its unique art and sfx direction, this VN wouldn't be the same.

Regarding the story, the theme was implemented in a reallly creative way. I remember when the theme was announced and us jammers would chat about how we could implement it, and space themes were brought up, but nothing like this. Nothing like having your honey moon interrupted by death by black hole. It's an interesting mix of sci-fi, horror, and rrrrrromance. And that's not the only that makes the creativity put in this game stand out. There was not only this main story I mentioned before, but also mini stories of dreams!!! Sick!!!

Concerning the cons of this VN, apart from the textbox thing and minor typos other comments mentioned (it's ok, I know how it feels like *centerright flashbacks* ), I feel there is something weird with Albert's character. I don't know if it is just me, but I feel as if we get to see a lot about Nova's character (emotions, personality, etc) but not that much about Albert. I get he is suppossed to be compossed and calm, but for me it feels as if he had little to no reaction to the whole end-of-the-world matter. Again, maybe it is just me.

That's what I think of this VN. Thanks for the experience!

Me sees VN! Me's 16th Vn me will read and rate from this jam! 

Edit 1: Ok, I have just read and rated this entry. Here are my thoughts.

First of all, I must highlight the fact you included poetry segments in the VN, a quite witty feature. However, to be honest the prose felt rough, which made the ideas and images conveyed in the poem sections hard to understand.

Every sprite and background is custom made. For a visual novel made entirely by a single person (minus the music), it's nice. As other comments below pointed out though, characters sort of get lost in the bright backgrounds.

The main negative aspect of this story is that it spends more time describing what the main character is doing than showing us the actual interactions between the wolf and the binturong or the main conflict which is the social animosity towards the wolf's city incorporation to another one. The poetry is there, sure, but the way it's been put up makes it insufficient to effectively tell the story.

These are my thoughts on this VN so far. Thanks for the experience! (Also, props for including a binturong in your VN, those are pretty rare and only you and the Three Aces author included one in your submissions).

15th submission I will read and rate here we GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

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Sorry, I couldn't resist.

Edit 2: Ok, I have just read and rated your VN. Here are my thoughts.

I can't write this VN without pointing out how great the visuals and music are in this VN. There are custom sprites and CG's that give off some kind of eerie vibe that's quite fitting for this story. Same goes for the UI, really. Without its unique art and sfx direction, this VN wouldn't be the same.

Regarding the story, the theme was implemented in a reallly creative way. I remember when the theme was announced and us jammers would chat about how we could implement it, and space themes were brought up, but nothing like this. Nothing like having your honey moon interrupted by death by black hole. It's an interesting mix of sci-fi, horror, and rrrrrromance. And that's not the only that makes the creativity put in this game stand out. There was not only this main story I mentioned before, but also mini stories of dreams!!! Sick!!!

Concerning the cons of this VN, apart from the textbox thing and minor typos other comments mentioned (it's ok, I know how it feels like *centerright flashbacks* ), I feel there is something weird with Albert's character. I don't know if it is just me, but I feel as if we get to see a lot about Nova's character (emotions, personality, etc) but not that much about Albert. I get he is suppossed to be compossed and calm, but for me it feels as if he had little to no reaction to the whole end-of-the-world matter. Again, maybe it is just me.

That's what I think of this VN. Thanks for the experience!

¿Te parecieron rusos mis personajes? XD