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CONGRATS ON FINISHING! Seriously, you packed a lot into a single page. I had a few thoughts while reading:

  • Love that your stats are all non-positive things haha!
  • SO the roll under mechanic took me a minute to get but is actually super clever. May want to clear this up a bit.
  • I was waiting for setting / tone and it came in the encounters and plot hooks. Now I want to know more about this strange little world you've packed into 1 pg.

Seriously, great job. If anything, lose the 1 page restriction and expand!

Thank you for the feedback, I really do appreciate it. You are right about the resolution mechanic, it does need some tidying - 'strange little world' - I like it.