Spoilers following:
Theme: Aough, all the lampshading of the theme to be met with expanding horizons. I guess, I get it, although I enjoyed the other interps along the way.
Story: Very much straightforward "this is how burning man could go if you had a big himbo working the event to go with you". You had me chuckling a lot throughout like the Homo Lobo only being recognizable with his cock out. Interesting that he became super introverted afterwards... I can get going away from like... "con mode", but that felt a bit beyond the measure of transformation? From extroverted to unable to look at the man you fucked like 12 hours ago instead of maybe just being... reserved?
At the start, prior to you getting in the groove, it felt like you wre telling me too much about the Possy's thought process re his anxiety. I think you could have cut out some of that language, and just let it show implicitly in his actions as opposed to explicitly being acknowledge between him and chloe (that and he seemed to get over it pretty quickly when face to face with a giant cock).
I do appreciate the dehydrated quality to the voice (e.g., desperately thirsty).
Presentation: The fucking spirit floating away. I was almost upset you didn't continue your gag with Chloe being at 40% opacity the rest of the story.
I also wish we had a howling sfx when it was supposed to be howling, but I thoroughly enjoyed the touches you put into the gui and overall presentation. And of course, teh custom artwork.
Creativity: I found it a really fun approach to do burning man framing for the narrative, although I found your comparisons of it to a furry con interesting where was the big himbo to escort me around when i went to a furry con?! pure baloney! :P although I can't say In my limited experience there's as much overwhelming kindness and openness that I hear is attributed to burning man.
Overall thoughts: You're certainly wanting me to escalate my schedule to read Alones, because you're a funny man even above your idiosyncracies with language.