there is a lot I like here.
first of all: big soda drinker here - the story totally speaks to me and is wonderfully over-the-top.
secondly: the blue-yellow-color scheme is *chef's kisses*
thirdly: I really like how the lanes, the slow moving lemonades and the same-looking dudes create something of a visual challenge for you to solve. I could easy imagine later stages where the lanes will cross in some M.C.-Escher-style impossible maze that makes it even harder to keep track of.
competent start!