Thanks for the thorough review and very kind words.
Yup, those little oversights are part of the time pressure effect. There were so many things I had to do, and with how much I wanted to put on the table, I'm sure you could understand that the project was quite complex. I even had to write more than half of the story directly on Visual Studio, so... :DaveSwt:
By the 2-hour mark from the deadline, I was too burnt out to fix the little things.
Glad to hear that the first part of the story is your favorite. But, as a storyteller, I don't want to be stuck only in writing sobfest depressing story. I know it's a total 180, but I want something that gives The Punisher theme vibes in FVN space lol. Welp, only time will tell.