This looks like the start of something very interesting. I was a little lost, but I assume that's due to the unfinished nature. Hope you're doing well and able to make some more progress on this at some point!
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I just didn't understand what was going on. I chose to ride the bus, picked a cab to avoid fighting, then was in a room with balloons and a present, tried interacting with a bunch of stuff before it finally asked me if I wanted to steal someone's present. It felt like a bunch of unconnected events. I didn't really understand my place or motivations in it.